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[Super Run Jumper]

It's a good start. I was able to run beyond the screen, resulting in the game eventually stopping. Having to constantly stop running in a run game to make sure that you're at a comfortable difficulty or to keep from going off the screen is pretty annoying. It would make sense to give a fixed running motion and allow the player to move left and right, or--should you choose to keep it with the player having full control of the running--allow the player to run to the left as well instead of waiting for the screen to catch up. Another alternative is to have a fixed running point and left/right controls the speed at which the game runs.

Pizzamakesgames responds:

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[Amnesia]

FIX THE JUMP!!! It's nearly unplayable as it is. I was able to finish the game somehow, but the inconsistency in the jumping made it an infuriating undertaking. Other than that, the game was very easy. It had a decent (albeit tear-jerking) storyline. All in all, if you fix the jump, I'd give it a 3/5.

wizzyxx responds:

Sorry, I would have fixed this earlier if I had seen the earlier reviews. Tweaked the jump a little, hope its better than before. I didn't want to make the jump too strong because the game was already very easy, and I wanted it to be at least a bit challenging. I didn't realise it added fake difficulty instead. Thanks for taking the time to play and reviewing!